Essay
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I was going to camping with my family during school vacation when I was a child. My family has not traveled much, either in the past and present, so camping was the most memorable. I think those moments of leisurely time spent playing in the valley and grilling meat were the happiest moments I\'ve had with my family.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Ji O!
Thank you for doing your homework. I agree with what you mentioned that since your family doesn’t travel much, you get to appreciate the time you spent with them more. Seeing that you remembered this makes me think it was really memorable for you.
- T. Caitlyn
I was going to camping with my family during school vacation when I was a child.
>> I went camping with my family during school vacation when I was a child.
My family has not traveled much, either in the past and present, so camping was the most memorable.
>> My family has not traveled much, either in the past or in the present, so camping was the most memorable.
I think those moments of leisurely time spent playing in the valley and grilling meat were the happiest moments I\'ve had with my family.
>> CORRECT
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