Essay
학생이 쓴 원문
Among the lessons my parents always emphasized to me was not to gossip about others and not to make enemies. As we go through, we can get arguments with others, and our relationship can become worse. My parent\'s told me, I don\'t have to force myself to please others, I have to still well behavior to them, even if our relationship break.They also said that if I behave badly toward others, negative rumors will eventually come back to me.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Ji O!
Wow! This lesson is truly important, especially nowadays when people can easily spread or say bad things about others. I also believe in the law of karma, like you mentioned. Doing bad things can come back to us, but if we do good, good things will come as well.
- T. Caitlyn
Among the lessons my parents always emphasized to me was not to gossip about others and not to make enemies.
>> CORRECT
As we go through, we can get arguments with others, and our relationship can become worse.
>> As we go through life, we can have arguments with others, and our relationships can worsen.
My parent\'s told me, I don\'t have to force myself to please others, I have to still well behavior to them, even if our relationship break.
>> My parents told me that I don’t have to force myself to please others; I still have to behave well toward them, even if our relationship breaks.
They also said that if I behave badly toward others, negative rumors will eventually come back to me.
>> CORRECT
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