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q If you were the president of Korea, what laws would you like to change and why? a. If I were the president of Korea, I would like to change 3laws. First, some laws about cruelities to animals. Animals have their life like us and they are good companion with people. I think people who bother animals will have to be punished heavily than now. Second, punishment about people who rape women. Frankly, punishment about them is very light in Korea. So, I want the law to change. Third, change about the national prosperity. In Korea, the gap between the rich and the pool is big. So, I want te gap to decrease because I hope that all of the Koreans are well of together.

 Good morning,[이름]! I think you can become a very good leader in the future. You are compassionate not only to people but also to the animals. I admire that. This is very interesting. I\'m impressed! Anyway, please be more careful with your spelling the next time, okay? Take care and have a nice day! q If you were the president of Korea, what laws would you like to change and why?a. If I were the president of Korea, I would like to change 3laws. >>CORRECT!First, some laws about cruelities to animals. >>First, I would like to change the  law regarding animal cruelty.Animals have their life like us and they are good companion with people. >>Animals have their life like us and they are a good companion to people. I think people who bother animals will have to be punished heavily than now. >>I think people who bother animals has to be punished more than now.Second, punishment about people who rape women. >>CORRECT! >>Second would be the punishment concerning people who rape women. Frankly, punishment about them is very light in Korea. >>CORRECT! >>Honestly, the punishment regarding rape in Korea is very light. So, I want the law to change. >>CORRECT! >>So I want to change the law about this.Third, change about the national prosperity. >>CORRECT! >>Third is the change about Korea\'s economic status. In Korea, the gap between the rich and the pool is big. >>In Korea, the  gap between the rich and the poor is big. So, I want te gap to decrease because I hope that all of the Koreans are well of together. >>So I want this gap to decrease because I am hoping that all Koreans should get along.