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Q. What are you planning to do this thanksgiving holiday?
A. I will go to my hometown, Dae-gu. I will have to help my mom. I have a lots of relations and they will come to my house. So, our family is very busy every thanksgiving holiday. Especially, mother and I will have to make many foods for visitors. It will be so hard work. But I like thanksgiving holiday! Because I can meet my relations in a long time and I can eat many kinds of food! (Altough I make the food....) First of all, I'm very happy that I can go to my house on the pretext of thanksgiving day!
강사 첨삭
Happy Friday, [이름]!
I think this Thanksgiving will be unforgettable for you because you will spending time with your loved ones. That is nice! Don\'t eat too much you might get fat. I know the food is good since you and your mom will be preparing them. Anyway, have a nice weekend and take care! I\'ll talk to you again on Monday.
Q. What are you planning to do this thanksgiving holiday?A. I will go to my hometown, Dae-gu.
>>CORRECT
>>I will be visiting my hometown in Daegu.
I will have to help my mom.
>>CORRECT
I have a lots of relations and they will come to my house.
>> I have lots of relatives and they will be coming to our house.
So, our family is very busy every thanksgiving holiday.
>>CORRECT
Especially, mother and I will have to make many foods for visitors.
>>My mother and I have to prepare lots of food for the visitors.
It will be so hard work.
>>CORRECT
But I like thanksgiving holiday!
>>CORRECT
Because I can meet my relations in a long time and I can eat many kinds of food! (Altough I make the food....)
>>I like it because I can spend time with my relatives whom I haven\'t seen for a long time and I can eat many kinds of food (although I prepared them).
First of all, I\'m very happy that I can go to my house on the pretext of thanksgiving day!
>> I\'m very happy that I can go to my house on the pretext of thanksgiving day.
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