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Q. How can you help out a person who is addicted to cigarette smoking? A. I will tell you about how I can help out my boyfriend who is addicted to cigarette smoking. When we entered University, he was addicted to cigarette smoking. Although he was not addicted to smoking deeply, but I hated the fact he was a smoker. I worried about his health. So, I used oppressive tactics. First, I hit him. Every time he was smoke, I hit him. I'm stronger than other women, so he was in pain. Second, I requested the help for friends. When my friends saw the scene that my boyfriend was smoking, they told me. Also, his smoking friends helped us. They didn't smoke in front of my boyfriend. Finally, I threaten him to split up with him if he smoke. Now, he is not smoker anymore. The process that I help out my boyfriend who smoke was very hard, but I am satisfied!

Hello there, [이름]! Happy Monday. I think you did it the hard way just so your boyfriend will stop smoking. But nonetheless, what you did was  effective. He\'s not smoking anymore. Good for you!  Anyway, I have provided the corrections below so please find time to check them out. Take care! Q. How can you help out a person who is addicted to cigarette smoking?A. I will tell you about how I can help out my boyfriend who is addicted to cigarette smoking. >>I will tell you how I helped out my boyfriend who is addicted to cigarette smoking. When we entered University, he was addicted to cigarette smoking. >>When we entered the University, he was addicted to cigarette smoking. Although he was not addicted to smoking deeply, but I hated the fact he was a smoker. >>Although he was not so addicted to smoking, I hated the fact that he was a smoker. I worried about his health. >>I\'m worried about his health. So, I used oppressive tactics. >>CORRECT! First, I hit him. >>CORRECT! Every time he was smoke, I hit him. >>Everytime he smokes, I hit him. I\'m stronger than other women, so he was in pain.  >>CORRECT! Second, I requested the help for friends. >>Second, I asked help from our friends. When my friends saw the scene that my boyfriend was smoking, they told me. >>When my friends see that my boyfriend was smoking, they tell me. Also, his smoking friends helped us. >>Also, his smoker friends helped us. They didn\'t smoke in front of my boyfriend. >>CORRECT! Finally, I threaten him to split up with him if he smoke. >>Finally, I threatened that I will split up with him if he doesn\'t quit smoking. Now, he is not smoker anymore. >>Now, he is not a smoker anymore. The process that I help out my boyfriend who smoke was very hard, but I am satisfied! >>The process that I helped out my boyfriend who was a smoker was very hard, but I am satisfied.