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Q.what can you say about the new iphone 5? A. I'm not interested in the new iphone 5. I don't know about iphone 5 well. I will tell you about the reason. First, I heard about launching a new iphone5, but I'm not interested in cell phone. Because I really busy for my studying. Second, I think Galaxy series is better for me. There is Samsung's Galaxy series in Korea. I think that iphone is better than Galaxy in using touch and number of apps. But, Galaxy is better than iphone in A/S. It's free. Also, Galaxy is convienent for Korean.

Hello there, [이름]! :) Like you, I also like Samsung. I think it\'s user friendly and more practical to use especially the applications found there. I used to have an iphone but it got destroyed easily so I tried using a galaxy phone for a change and so far I\'m satisfied with it.  Thank you so much for doing your homework. Take care and I\'ll see you in class. Q.what can you say about the new iphone 5?A. I\'m not interested in the new iphone 5. >>CORRECT! I don\'t know about iphone 5 well. >>CORRECT! >>I\'m not familiar with iphone 5. I will tell you about the reason. >>I will tell you my reasons. First, I heard about launching a new iphone5, but I\'m not interested in cell phone. >> First, I heard about the launching of the new iphone 5 but I\'m not interested in cell phones. Because I really busy for my studying. >>I\'m really busy studying. >>I\'m really focused with my studies. Second, I think Galaxy series is better for me. >>Second, I think the Galaxy series is better for me. There is Samsung\'s Galaxy series in Korea. >>There is the Samsung galaxy series in Korea. I think that iphone is better than Galaxy in using touch and number of apps. >> I think that iphone is better than Galaxy phones in terms of its touch screen and number of apps. But, Galaxy is better than iphone in A/S. >>CORRECT! It\'s free. >>CORRECT! Also, Galaxy is convienent for Korean. >>Also, Galaxy phones are convenient for Koreans.