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In addition, there is another benefit that social relationship is developed and enriched, thanks to social network program like facebook and twitter. Now people around all the world can know stories of a very small country town by this technology. On the other hand, many people have their opinion that development of communications technoloy make many problems that we could not expect. they point low-level culture in internet, circulation of distorted information, and lack of face to face connection as its problems. However, In my opinion, this problems can not overshadow the merits that are mentioned above and can be overcame once they are dealt well with enough time and efforts.

In addition, there is another benefit that social relationship is developed and enriched, thanks to social network program like facebook and twitter. >>Another benefit of modern communication is that, social relationship can be developed and enriched thanks to social networking programs like facebook and twitter. Now people around all the world can know stories of a very small country town by this technology. >>Now people around the world can know the different stories of differents places throgh the use of this technology. On the other hand, many people have their opinion that development of communications technoloy make many problems that we could not expect. >>On the other hand, many people have their own opinions and think that the development of communication technology make many problems that we could not expect. they point low-level culture in the internet, circulation of distorted information, and lack of face to face connection as its problems. >>correct However, In my opinion, this problems cannot overshadow the merits that are mentioned above and can be overcame once they are dealt well with enough time and efforts. >> However, In my opinion, this problems cannot overshadow the merits that are mentioned above, and we can overcome these problems once we deal it well giving enough time and effort.