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학생이 쓴 원문
Hi, Rowena.
Today, you don't leave a homework.
So I decide to write my daily essay. After reading my writing, correct errors.
Today, I overslept because it was my day off.
I remembered I got up about 3 pm.
Last night, I worked in my office all night.
Due to my fatigue, I understand my oversleep.
After getting up, I satisfy my hunger with some milk and bread.
Then, I kill my free time by playing the guitar.
Recently, I started to learn how to play it.
It's pretty interesting and I can be relieved from the stress.
I tried to practice the title song of Westlife, My love.
Until just a few minutes ago, I didn't remember the title song.
But I get an idea at this moment.
I want to be skiled about playing the guitar.
By praticing very hard, I'm sure I will be a perfect player.
I anticipate my ability is better to play the instument in addition to speaking english. I wish the day could come as soon as possible.
강사 첨삭
Hello there Eden!
Thanks for submitting your composition.
PLease do check my corrections.
I actually gave you a homework. Please check it. ^^
Take care!
See you!
T. Rowena
Today, you don\'t leave a homework.
>>You didn\'t leave a homework today.So I decide to write my daily essay.
>>So I decided to write my daily essay.
After reading my writing, correct errors.>>After reading my composition, correct my errors.Today, I overslept because it was my day off.
>>correct!I remembered I got up about 3 pm.
>>I remembered I got up at about 3 pm.Last night, I worked in my office all night.
>>correct!Due to my fatigue, I understand my oversleep.>>I overslept because of overfatigue.After getting up, I satisfy my hunger with some milk and bread.
>>After getting up, I satisfied my hunger with some milk and bread.Then, I kill my free time by playing the guitar.
>>correct!Recently, I started to learn how to play it.
>>correct!It\'s pretty interesting and I can be relieved from the stress.>>It\'s pretty interesting and I can be relieved from the stress.I tried to practice the title song of Westlife, My love.>>I tried to practice the song entitled my love.Until just a few minutes ago, I didn\'t remember the title song.
>>Until just a few minutes ago, I couldn\'t remember the lyrics of the song. But I get an idea at this moment.
>> But I got an idea.I want to be skiled about playing the guitar.
>>I want to be good at playing the guitar.By praticing very hard, I\'m sure I will be a perfect player.>>correct!I anticipate my ability is better to play the instument in addition to speaking english. I wish the day could come as soon as possible.
>> I think that I\'m good in playing the instrument which I want to have in learning English. I wish the day will come as soon as possible.
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