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2013-03-20 · 첨삭 강사 Rowena

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Hi, Rowena. Today, you don't leave a homework. So I decide to write my daily essay. After reading my writing, correct errors. Today, I overslept because it was my day off. I remembered I got up about 3 pm. Last night, I worked in my office all night. Due to my fatigue, I understand my oversleep. After getting up, I satisfy my hunger with some milk and bread. Then, I kill my free time by playing the guitar. Recently, I started to learn how to play it. It's pretty interesting and I can be relieved from the stress. I tried to practice the title song of Westlife, My love. Until just a few minutes ago, I didn't remember the title song. But I get an idea at this moment. I want to be skiled about playing the guitar. By praticing very hard, I'm sure I will be a perfect player. I anticipate my ability is better to play the instument in addition to speaking english. I wish the day could come as soon as possible.

강사 첨삭

Hello there Eden! Thanks for submitting your composition. PLease do check my corrections. I actually gave you a homework. Please check it. ^^ Take care! See you! T. Rowena   Today, you don\'t leave a homework. >>You didn\'t leave a homework today.So I decide to write my daily essay. >>So I decided to write my daily essay. After reading my writing, correct errors.>>After reading my composition, correct my errors.Today, I overslept because it was my day off. >>correct!I remembered I got up about 3 pm. >>I remembered I got up at about 3 pm.Last night, I worked in my office all night. >>correct!Due to my fatigue, I understand my oversleep.>>I overslept because of overfatigue.After getting up, I satisfy my hunger with some milk and bread. >>After getting up, I satisfied my hunger with some milk and bread.Then, I kill my free time by playing the guitar. >>correct!Recently, I started to learn how to play it. >>correct!It\'s pretty interesting and I can be relieved from the stress.>>It\'s pretty interesting and I can be relieved from the stress.I tried to practice the title song of Westlife, My love.>>I tried to practice the song entitled my love.Until just a few minutes ago, I didn\'t remember the title song. >>Until just a few minutes ago, I couldn\'t remember the lyrics of the song. But I get an idea at this moment. >> But I got an idea.I want to be skiled about playing the guitar. >>I want to be good at playing the guitar.By praticing very hard, I\'m sure I will be a perfect player.>>correct!I anticipate my ability is better to play the instument in addition to speaking english. I wish the day could come as soon as possible. >> I think that I\'m good in playing the instrument which I want to have in learning English. I wish the day will come as soon as possible.  

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