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Although I intentionally try to forget about the bad things that I had, it's not easy to do that. What I usually do to make myself feel better or to get out of the difficult moment is that I stive to change my view. What does it mean by "change my veiw"? It means that even a bad thing could be viewed positively depending on how you think. It all depends on my mind. Life is a marathon which is quite a long journey. There are ups and downs in life and the current difficult time could be remembered as precious part of my life. Remind myself of exactly how much worse it could be. Life is great so I should live like there's no tomorrow! Do I have time to be suffered from this bad feeling if there is no tomorrow? If I think this way, I all of sudden realize that I am a still valuable person and life is worth living. In addition, I do exercise when I am stressed out, which is the best way to stay away from the issue that is bothering me.

Hi Sir [이름]^^ Thank you for sharing your thoughts about the essay. I am sure that you can overcome all of the trials that will come your way because you are a positive thinker. You are right! We should make the most of it everyday. I am so happy that I met you.Great! You were able to share your ideas well. Keep it up!Please go over the corrections I gave you.See you tomorrow!Teacher Nina Here are my corrections for you: Although I intentionally try to forget about the bad things that I had, it\'s not easy to do that. >> Correct! What I usually do to make myself feel better or to get out of the difficult moment is that I stive to change my view. >> What I usually do to make myself feel better or to get out of the difficult moment is to strive hard to change my perceprtion or the way I think. What does it mean by \"change my veiw\"? >> What does it mean by \"changing my view?\" It means that even a bad thing could be viewed positively depending on how you think. >> Correct! OR >> It means that even a bad thing could be viewed positively depending on how you take it. It all depends on my mind. >> Correct! OR >> It depends on my perception. Life is a marathon which is quite a long journey. >> Correct! There are ups and downs in life and the current difficult time could be remembered as precious part of my life. >> There are ups and downs in life and the difficult time could be remembered as a precious part of my life. Remind myself of exactly how much worse it could be. >> I remind myself how worse it could be. Life is great so I should live like there\'s no tomorrow! >> Correct! Do I have time to be suffered from this bad feeling if there is no tomorrow? >> Do I have time to suffer from this bad feeling if there is no tomorrow? If I think this way, I all of sudden realize that I am a still valuable person and life is worth living. >> If I think this way, I suddenly realized that I am still valuable person and life is worth living In addition, I do exercise when I am stressed out, which is the best way to stay away from the issue that is bothering me. >> Correct! OR >> In addition, I do exercise when I am stressed out, which is the best way to get rid of the worries that I have.