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Do violent video games cause behavior problems? Why?/Why not?Add your reasoning
Looking at the current cases of sex related crimes, convicts are saying that they have frequently watched and addicted to such hardcore videos, which implied that they were largely affected by such videos. We can apply the same theory to the violent video games as well. Violence in video games leads to violent outbreaks and bad behavior in real life. Many studies have taken place to look into whether or not these games are causing bad behavior and they showed that yes these violent games are actually causing aggressive behavior. It’s quite common sense that what you watch on television, the people you hang with, and the games you play can affect one’s behavior whether negatively or positively.
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Good evening Sir [이름]^^
Thank you for sending this in. Your opinions were great! It is true that media has a great impact on one\'s behavior. A lot of people are more consious nowadays with the television programs they usually watch because they know that if a child was able to watch a program that is not suitable for his or her age it might affect his or her behavior in the future. Thank you for your brilliant ideas.^^ See you!
Teacher Nina
Do violent video games cause behavior problems? Why?/Why not?Add your reasoningLooking at the current cases of sex related crimes, convicts are saying that they have frequently watched and addicted to such hardcore videos, which implied that they were largely affected by such videos.
>> Looking at the current cases of sex related crimes, convicts are saying that they have frequently watched and got addicted to such hardcore videos, which implied that they were largely affected by those.
We can apply the same theory to the violent video games as well.
>> Correct!
Violence in video games leads to violent outbreaks and bad behavior in real life.
>> Correct!
Many studies have taken place to look into whether or not these games are causing bad behavior and they showed that yes these violent games are actually causing aggressive behavior.
>> Many studies have taken place to look into whether or not these games are causing bad behavior and they showed that yes these violent games are actually causing aggressive behaviors.
It’s quite common sense that what you watch on television, the people you hang with, and the games you play can affect one’s behavior whether negatively or positively.
>> It\'s quite common sense that what you watch on television,the people you hang out with and the games you play can affect one\'s behavior whether negatively or positively.
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