essay 3
학생이 쓴 원문
hell, my name is RYAN. today i will tell you \'What do you think the clouds look like?\'
from an subjective perspective, i think clouds look like candy, train and animal shapes! so, they look like many object or animal shapes
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this Ryan!
hell, my name is RYAN.
>>> Hello, my name is RYAN.
today i will tell you \'What do you think the clouds look like?\'
>>> Today, I will tell you how I think the clouds look like.
>>> Today, I will tell you how I think the clouds look like.
from an subjective perspective, i think clouds look like candy, train and animal shapes!
>>> From a subjective perspective, I think clouds look like candy, train and animal shapes!
so, they look like many object or animal shapes
>>> correct
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