Essay 3
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
It is also said that in Korea, psychology has not developed much and is usually taught in foreign universities or graduate schools.
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If I have a chance, I want to go to an exchange student or graduate school. I\'d like to learn psychology for a long time and give a more professional counselor.
>> If I have a chance, I want to be an exchange student or go to graduate school abroad. I\'d like to learn psychology for a long time and to be a professional counselor.
Also, it seems necessary to have a broad understanding of the culture of other countries as the children I use as assailants are children of multi-cultural families.
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Of course, there will be people from various countries in international marriages, but I will be a counselor with a great understanding of their culture even if I cannot learn all about them.
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