ESSAY 3: Abandoned animals-2

Here the essay is continued. Euthanasia may be applied to someone who has deadly disease and pain. I convince it should be change for animal’s right. As long as, we don’t respect animal’s life and right, we can’t be respected. I wish an animal’s legal law become strict and rigid. I will make effort for that. Someday, I will participate to help abandoned animals with my friends in the near future. I appreciate that you read my essay. Thank you so much;)

These are the other corrections. You are welcome. Here the essay is continued.>> Correct! Or: Here continues the essay.Euthanasia may be applied to someone who has deadly disease and pain. >> Correct!I convince it should be change for animal\'s right. >> I am convinced that it should be too for the animal rights.As long as, we don\' respect animal\'slife and right, we can\' be respected. >> As long as we don\'t respect an animal\'s life and rights, we can\'t be respected too.I wish an animal\' legal law become strict and rigid. >> I wish that the animal law become more strict and rigid.I will make effort for that. >> Correct!Someday, I will participate to help abandoned animals with my friends in the near future.>> Someday, I will help the abandoned animals together with my friends.I appreciate that you read my essay. >> Correct! Thank you so much;) >> Correct!