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Happy Monday [이름]!! Thank you for sending this composition and sharing about the blog that inspires you most.^^ I will be trying to read about it also during my free time. ^_^ Anyway, here are the corrections I made on some of your sentences. I believe the page was not enough for your message but you can always use another one to share your thoughts. I look forward to reading the rest of your composition. See you!! - T. Giselle :)   I think most of people who visit this blog might be curious about the blog itself, so I decide to introduce the reason and purpose of the blog before starting its \'real\' posts. >> I think most of people who visit this blog might be curious about the blog itself, so I decided to introduce the reason and purpose of the blog before starting its \'real\' posts.\'The Mouse Driver Chronicles: The True-Life Adventures of Two First-Time Entrepreneurs\' is the well-known book for start-up and it\'s one of my favorites. >> Correct! There are many reasons why I believe it\'s worth to read but the core value of the book is to deliver all the detailed experiences and arduous journey to be an entrepreneur without making any adjustments. >> There are many reasons why I believe it\'s worth reading it but the core value of the book is to deliver all the detailed experiences and arduous journeys on how to be an entrepreneur without making any adjustments. I want to talk about \'big data\' here which is the hottest trend nowadays but almost the whole people have no idea how to use it. >> I want to talk about the \'big data\' here which is the hottest trend nowadays but most people have no idea how to use it. As everybody knows, big data wave is in its embryonic stage. >> Correct! I would like to record all the changes in big data movement without making any adjustments and moreover suggest the methods to utilize it as a witness in the center of the wave. >> I would like to record all the changes in  the big data movement without making any adjustments and moreover suggest the methods on how to utilize it as a witness in the center of the wave.Therefore, the purpose of the blog is as follows: >> Therefore, the purposes of the blog are as follows:1. Help people in diverse positions w >> 1. Help people in diverse positions...