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Hi! It is very late in korea here. I am so sorry for infringing my promise that I will do my homework right after the class. I was really busy:( Sorry~ So I really did hard in my homework!! Today,Our society can remain and keep safe and comfortable because there are rules. But what if there aren't any prohibitions? The biggest difference is people are not going to do their works and business. Of course students are not going to go their school because teacher don't have to force them to come to school. Students will remain stagnant of their knowledge. And farmers won't cultivate the crops. People will starve and die due to the lack of food. Also armies don't have to protect their countries safely. As a result the other countries will attack our countriy. And the peace of our country will be destroyed day by day. Besides police are not going to arrest criminals so people can easily access to crimes. Finally there are no doctors who can cure and alleviate their illness, patients are dying with the pain. There should be rules and taboos if a country won't be destroy.

Hello there [이름]^^   Why are you still up? Apology forgiven my dear^^ Theres\'s no big deal with that because I really understand how busy you are with your everyday activities. So don\'t feel sad about that. Anyways, I appreciate your effort though because you still did your homework. Honestly I feel great about this effort you did. Let\'s talk about you work here. I bet you right! You really did a great work in this essay. Your imaginations were to the extent that I didn\'t of it at all. I was amazed by your good answers. I have to say it that you have a great skill in writing so I want you to keep on developing it. Work with this my dear because this is a talent. I can see you a great talent of writing in you [이름]! Be inspired always and thanks again for this. Two thumbs up for this!!! See you tomorrow!  Good night my dear^0^, Teacher Liza   Hi! >>Correct It is very late in korea here. >>It\'s already late in Korea now. I am so sorry for infringing my promise that I will do my homework right after the class. >>Correct >>OR: I\'m sorry for not fulfilling my promise to do my homework right after our class. I was really busy:( Sorry~ >>Correct (It\'s okay my dear^^) So I really did hard in my homework!! >>CorrectToday,Our society can remain and keep safe and comfortable because there are rules. >>Today, our society can remain safe and comfortable because there are rules. >>OR: Today, our society can remain safe and comfortable because of the existence of rules. But what if there aren\'t any prohibitions? >>Correct The biggest difference is people are not going to do their works and business. >>Correct >>OR: The thing might happen is that people are not going to do their works and business. Of course students are not going to go their school because teacher don\'t have to force them to come to school. >>Correct Students will remain stagnant of their knowledge. >>Correct And farmers won\'t cultivate the crops. >>Correct People will starve and die due to the lack of food. >>Correct Also armies don\'t have to protect their countries safely. >>Correct As a result the other countries will attack our countriy. >>As a result,the other countries will attack our country. And the peace of our country will be destroyed day by day. >>And the peace in our country will be destroyed day by day. Besides police are not going to arrest criminals so people can easily access to crimes. >>Correct Finally there are no doctors who can cure and alleviate their illness, patients are dying with the pain. >>Correct There should be rules and taboos if a country won\'t be destroy. >>There should be rules and taboos in a country so it won\'t be destroy.