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학생이 쓴 원문
uhm~~~ Today's question is difficult to me. I've thought for some minutes. But I couldn't find the time, I went above and beyond the call of duty. When I had a job I didn't need to go above and beyond the call of duty. Nobody ordered me to do something. some people have good abilities in their job also they make an effort a lot to get results what they wants. Maybe those people are memorable characters. I'm a ordinary person. I don't want to be a famous. I like my life and I'm fully enjoy with my life. so I will do something in my call of duty, that is enough. If everyone is working with responsibility then world will be brighter than now. We don't need to exeed our ability. Just don't do that bad behavior for society or others. My essay is missing the point but the conclusion is that we don't need to do good deed, just don't do bad deed then our society will be perfect~~~
강사 첨삭
Happy Monday Morning my dear [이름] Na!
hmmm yep... I think you got confused with the essay.
Above and beyond means, exceeding your capabilities and the rules of the company.
No matter what, you still did well.
The point of your essay is related to the question.
I think we can make this question a free talking topic for today. Yeah?
I will see you then later.
Always,
~Aimee^^
>> Correct
Today\'s question is difficult to me.
>> Today\'s question is difficult for me.,
I\'ve thought for some minutes.
>> I\'ve thought about it for sometime.
But I couldn\'t find the time, I went above and beyond the call of duty.
>> Correct
When I had a job I didn\'t need to go above and beyond the call of duty.
>> Correct
Nobody ordered me to do something.
>> Correct
some people have good abilities in their job also they make an effort a lot to get results what they wants.
>> Some people perform well on their job but they also make a lot of effort to get a good result.
Maybe those people are memorable characters.
>> Maybe those people are incredible characters.
I\'m a ordinary person.
>> i\'m an ordinary person.
I don\'t want to be a famous.
>> I don\'t want to be famous.
I like my life and I\'m fully enjoy with my life.
>> i like my life and I am enjoying it.
so I will do something in my call of duty, that is enough.
>> So I will do something about my call of duty.
If everyone is working with responsibility then world will be brighter than now.
>> If everyone is working responsibly, then the world will be brighter compared now.
We don\'t need to exeed our ability.
>> We don\'t need to exceed our abilities.
Just don\'t do that bad behavior for society or others.
>> Just don\'t do anything bad to your society and to others.
My essay is missing the point but the conclusion is that we don\'t need to do good deed, just don\'t do bad deed then our society will be perfect~~~
>> My essay is missing the point but the conclusion is that, we need to do good deeds and make sure not to hurt others.
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