essay 4
학생이 쓴 원문
hello, am ryan . today i will tell you \'Do you like inviting people/friends to your house? Why do you like it?\'
i like in inviting people to my house because when my friend comes to my house, we can play together and play a lot of games
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this once again Ryan!
hello, am ryan .
>>> Hello, I am [Name].
today i will tell you \'Do you like inviting people/friends to your house? Why do you like it?\'
>>> Today, I will tell you if I like inviting friends to my house and why I like it.
i like in inviting people to my house because when my friend comes to my house, we can play together and play a lot of games
i like in inviting people to my house because when my friend comes to my house, we can play together and play a lot of games
>>> I like inviting people to my house because when my friend comes to my house, we can play together and play a lot of games
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