Essay 4/20
학생이 쓴 원문
Which is easier to endure: a good workplace with bad colleagues or good colleagues with a bad workplace? Why?
I believe that last one is better.
It might because I like people and think I can overcome everything if threre are good colleagues who have same opponions with me.
But, I know that it is too hard situation to meet for our.
We are different and have to fit each others.
강사 첨삭
I believe that last one is better.
>> CORRECT
OR >> I believe that last one is better.
It might because I like people and think I can overcome everything if threre are good colleagues who have same opponions with me.
>> It might be because I like people and think I can overcome everything if there are good colleagues who have the same opinions as me.
>> It might be because I like people and think I can overcome everything if there are good colleagues who have the same opinions as me.
But, I know that it is too hard situation to meet for our.
>> But I know that it is a very hard situation for us to find.
>> But I know that it is a very hard situation for us to find.
OR >> But I know it is very hard for us to find such a situation.
We are different and have to fit each others.
>> We are different and have to adapt to each other.
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