Essay #4
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK: Are you good at getting things done on time? What takes up most of your time? Discuss in 3 to 5 sentences.
I think I\'m not good at getting things done on time.
I usually put off work that I don\'t want to do. So, I can not finish it on time.
But If I\'m interesting to me, I can finish the work on time.
These days, I take up mentoring junior who they are university students.
It is very interesting to me.
therefore, I\'m always good at getting things done on time!
If I can speak English very well in the future, I want to be a good English mentor like you.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름] Seog. Your homework was a great read and thank you for the compliment at the end.^^ It is also my pleasure to be your teacher. It is not easy to be a mentor. I admire your effort to be a mentor to university students. I bet they look up to you. Let\'s talk again tomorrow.Have a great Thursday evening. ~ Teacher Jane c\",)
I think I\'m not good at getting things done on time.
>>> CORRECT =)
>>> OR: I think I am not good at getting things done on time.
I usually put off work that I don\'t want to do.
>>> CORRECT =)
>>> OR: I usually put off work that I do not want to do.
So, I can not finish it on time.
>>> So, I cannot finish it on time.
But If I\'m interesting to me, I can finish the work on time.
>>> But if it is interesting to me, I can finish the work on time.
These days, I take up mentoring junior who they are university students.
>>> These days, I take up mentoring juniors who are university students.
It is very interesting to me.
>>> CORRECT =)
therefore, I\'m always good at getting things done on time!
>>> Therefore, I am always good at getting things done on time!
If I can speak English very well in the future, I want to be a good English mentor like you.
>>> CORRECT =)
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