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I'm so sorry for put today's class off!! I had a valid reason.:-( This is an essay that I've been doing. I'd like you to check it with care whether I'm wrong or not. Another distinguishing feature is that the simple message strengthened deep insight. "The Power of Habit" describes the importance of changing bad habits into good things, plus explaining in depth the value of understanding consumer's habit. But any summaries can't be alternative the joy of reading the book. (=aren't able to replace the joy~) A quite number of students said that it is the best textbook.

Hi there Conner^^   Great job on your sentences. I think that you just get confused with your verbs when you try to rephrase. I think that you did we and I just made a few corrections and more of giving alternative sentences. I hope I helped.   Great book^^ Keep in up! ^^   T.Debby^^    Here are my corrections for you:   I\'m so sorry for put today\'s class off!! >> I\'m sorry for cancelling class.I had a valid reason.:-( >> CORRECT Or> I will be reasonable.This is an essay that I\'ve been doing. >> CORRRECT OR> I have been working on this essay.I\'d like you to check it with care whether I\'m wrong or not. >> CORRECT OR> I\'d like you to give me the proper corrections.Another distinguishing feature is that the simple message strengthened deep insight. >> CORRECT OR> Another noticeable aspect is that the simple message made a stronger idea.\"The Power of Habit\" describes the importance of changing bad habits into good things, plus explaining in depth the value of understanding consumer\'s habit. >> \"The Power of Habit\" describes the importance of changing bad habits into good things, plus explaining in depth the value of understanding  a consumer\'s habit.But any summaries can\'t be alternative the joy of reading the book. >> CORRECT OR> Whatever summary there is, it won\'t alter the joy of reading the book.(=aren\'t able to replace the joy~) >> CORRRECT OR> wouldn\'t be able to replace the joy.A quite number of students said that it is the best textbook. >> Quite a number of students said that it is the best textbook.