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Hi my tutor! I've been working on this job, but I don't understand the narrative kikiki.. I guess It's also difficult to you. but I'd like you to just check my grammar and whether I used right words or not. Writing in English is very complicated to me. If would you mind, Please check my sentences thoroughly. See you tomorrow~ Business bestsellers which have timeless qualities share a common trait. they promote the message which(=that) the other business books in the generation(=era) tend to neglect. For instance(=example), The book has been still reading by many. The author, Dale Carnegie, wrote the book in an era when the scientific world considered IQ as the only standard of intelligence. In the book, He highlighted the importance of relation(or relationships), which is considered EQ by people (=regarded as EQ by people)

Hi my student Conner!^^   That was challenging but I hope I helped you with what you need. I think that the books you read are very complicated and has a lot of terms and theories of reality. Make it a point that the sentences have the main ideas and it is good that you consider the variations of the words with your sentences. To lessen confusion, stick to one word that would connect the ideas of your sentences and of course compliment your ability and creativity with sentences. Keep it simple. You\'d never go wrong. Take care^^   T.Debby^^   Here are my corrections:   Hi my tutor! >> CORRECT OR> Hi teacher.^^I\'ve been working on this job, but I don\'t understand the narrative kikiki.. >> CORRECT OR> I\'ve been working on this but the narrative is too difficult for me.I guess It\'s also difficult to you. >> CORRECT OR> It might be difficult for you too.but I\'d like you to just check my grammar and whether I used right words or not. >> but I\'d like you to just check my grammar and whether I used the right words or not.Writing in English is very complicated to me. >> Writing in English is very complicated for me.If would you mind, Please check my sentences thoroughly. >> CORRECT OR> Please do me a favor and check my sentences properly.See you tomorrow~ >> CORRECT OR> See you in class.Business bestsellers which have timeless qualities share a common trait.>> CORRECT OR> Business tycoons which have endless qualities share a common factor.they promote the message which(=that) the other business books in the generation(=era) tend to neglect.>> They promote the message which/that the other business books in the present generation tend to neglect.For instance(=example), The book has been still reading by many.>> For instance/example, the book is still being read by many. (use present progressive tense if it\'s still happening)The author, Dale Carnegie, wrote the book in an era when the scientific worldconsidered IQ as the only standard of intelligence. >> The author, Dale Carnegie, wrote the book in an era where the scientific world isconsidered as a standard for IQ intelligence.In the book, He highlighted the importance of relation(or relationships), which is considered EQ by people(=regarded as EQ by people) >> CORRECT OR> He made a trong point on the importance of building relationships which is known as EQ.