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Kim Sung-Min is famous for actor in Korea. Before arresing, He has been appearing on KBS Happy Sunday’s 'Qualifications of a Man,” a variety show, and presented a fun, positive image. However, the discovery of his drug use has ruined the trust he had built up with the viewing public. Everyone makes mistakes. But we need to legislation,though it is rigid rules.

Hi, [이름]! Saehae Bok Mani Badseiyo! Good thing you were able to know about what happened to Kim Sung Min. Yeah, you’re right. He is known by many as a good actor and a kind man in real life. But personal reasons pushed him to do such illegal act. I’ll talk with you again on Monday! Take care! Thinking of you, Teacher Joanna   Kim Sung-Min is famous for actor in Korea. >>Kim Sung Min is a famous actor from Korea. (FROM Korea because he is not only famous IN Korea but also in the other countries) Before arresing, He has been appearing on KBS Happy Sunday’s 'Qualifications of a Man,” a variety show, and presented a fun, positive image. >>Before his arrest, he has been appearing to some TV programs like the recent appearance on KBS Happy Sunday’s variety show, “Qualifications of a Man.” He was even in a positive image at that time.  However, the discovery of his drug use has ruined the trust he had built up with the viewing public. >> However, the discovery of his illegal use of drug has ruined the trust he had built with the viewing public. Everyone makes mistakes. >>correct But we need to legislation,though it is rigid rules. >>But no one is exempted when it comes to the law.