Essay

2014-07-07 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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From doing in advance, We could be more perfect than doing something imminently. When we do something with much time, we could prepare a lot of things. And in the aspect of phsycology, we are not nervous if we do something in advance. Because we are 'well-prepared'. When a semester begins and all the teachers start their classes, I start my study too. I review the contents that I learned in class on the same day. Because if I review them on the same day, I could memorize well and cannot forget even after the exams are finished. Although I review them during 30minutes or an hour, it could be much time when exams are approaching. And with these preparations, I don't get stress, rather I enjoy my studies. That's why I prefer preparing the exams in advance to cramming. Hi, Klein! I'm always please to share a lot of things with you. It helps me to feel studying English is enjoyable:) I also want to share much data and our thought about it. Then our class will be more valuable! xD

강사 첨삭

Thank you so much for allotting some time for your homework Yisol! How I hope you will continue sending in compositions on a regular basis. Your attempt to get your thoughts right and clear is noteworthy. Nice job! I just want you to check the recommendations below so you will always be guided. Nonetheless, with the concept of pragmatics of language, you were able to meet your objective - I understood your remarks perfectly! Please enjoy writing as much as you enjoy conversing with me. Let us make every single second count, or as you mentioned below, \"valuable\". Enjoy the rest of the day Yisol! _Klein From doing in advance, We could be more perfect than doing something imminently. >>From doing something in advance, we could do it more perfectly than doing something imminently. When we do something with much time, we could prepare a lot of things. >>Correct! And in the aspect of phsycology, we are not nervous if we do something in advance. Because we are \'well-prepared\'. >>Correct [spelling check: psychology] OR >> And in the aspect of Psychology, we are not nervous when we do something in advance because we are well-prepared.When a semester begins and all the teachers start their classes, I start my study too. >>Correct! OR >> I start with my studies, too. I review the contents that I learned in class on the same day. Because if I review them on the same day, I could memorize well and cannot forget even after the exams are finished. >>Correct! Although I review them during 30minutes or an hour, it could be much time when exams are approaching. >>Although I review them for 30 minutes or an hour, it could be much time when exams are approaching. And with these preparations, I don\'t get stress, rather I enjoy my studies. >>Correct! That\'s why I prefer preparing the exams in advance to cramming. >>That\'s why I prefer preparing for the exams in advance over cramming.Hi, Klein! >>Correct! I\'m always please to share a lot of things with you. >>I\'m always pleased to share a lot of things with you. It helps me to feel studying English is enjoyable:) >>Correct! I also want to share much data and our thought about it. Then our class will be more valuable! xD >>Correct!

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