essay 5
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, i`m Ryan. today i will tell you `Is there anything i need to buy? Where do i usually buy things i need?`
what i need to buy is book. I usually buy books on the Internet.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this Ryan!
Hello, I`m Ryan.
>>> correct
today i will tell you `Is there anything i need to buy? Where do i usually buy things i need?`
>>> Today, I will tell you about what I need to buy an where do I usually buy the things I need.
What I need to buy is book.
>>> correct
>>> OR: I need to buy a book.
I usually buy books on the Internet.
>>> correct
>>> OR: I usually buy books online.
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