Essay #5
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I think that good manners mean kindness, considering.
If I had good manners, I would be help me succeed.
People will help me when I\'m in a difficult situation If I have good manners. Then I will grow up faster than other people.
Good manners will help it
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I think that good manners mean kindness, considering.
>>> CORRECT =)
If I had good manners, I would be help me succeed.
>>> If I had good manners, it would help me succeed.
People will help me when I\'m in a difficult situation If I have good manners.
>>> People will help me when I am in a difficult situation if I have good manners.
Then I will grow up faster than other people.
>>> Then I will mature faster than other people.
Good manners will help it
>>> Having good manners will help me fulfill it.
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