ESSAY 6-2: Having a time with RUBY

Hi this is Nayoung Here the essay is continued. I am appreciated with your advise. Thank you. Furthermore, I often take a shower Ruby. I put her into a basket with water and wet her hair. In additional, I massage her body with bubble soap. It seems like she is really satisfied with the massage. Ruby is so much cute and adorable I always miss her when I am separated with her. So I have plenty of photos in my phone. One day I heard some news which was about the dogs. Apparently, 12 per cent of dogs meet their death with their owner. That means a lot of dogs used to be lost her owner or home before they die. It’s really a tragic reality.

I am glad to help you Nayoung! Here is the rest of the corrections. I hope they will help ypu much. See you! -T. Donna Hi this is Nayoung >> Hi this is Nayoung.Here the essay is continued. >> Here continues the essay.I am appreciated with your advise. >> I appreciate your advice.Thank you. >> Correct!Furthermore, I often take a shower Ruby. I put her into a basket with water and wet her hair. >> Furthermore, I often give Ruby a shower. I put her into a basket with water and then wet her hair.In additional, I massage her body with bubble soap. >> Correct!It seems like she is really satisfied with the massage. >> Correct!Ruby is so much cute and adorable I always miss her when I am separated with her. >> Ruby is so much cute and adorable I always miss her when I get separated from her.So I have plenty of photos in my phone. >> So I have plenty of photos of her in my phone.One day I heard some news which was about the dogs. >> One day I heard a news which was about dogs.Apparently, 12 per cent of dogs meet their death with their owner. >> Correct!It means a lot of dogs used to be lost her owner or home before they die. >> It means that a lot of dogs get lost by the owner or the home before they die.It\'s really a tragic reality. >> Correct!