Essay

2016-09-24 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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Essay: How often do you go to the library? What would happen if libraries suddenly disappeared? => Last semester, I often go to library whenever I have break time between lectures. the library in the university or college aren't disappeared but nowadays, local libraries are hard to find. I think people prefer watching their cell phone or television instead of book.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Jacob!^^   Thank you for accomplishing your homework. You have great ideas to impart. :) I definitely agree with the things you wrote. See you on Monday!^^   _T. Mayleen_   Last semester, I often go to library whenever I have break time between lectures. >> Last semester, I often go to the library whenever I have break-time in between lectures.the library in the university or college aren\'t disappeared but nowadays, local libraries are hard to find. I think people prefer watching their cell phone or television instead of book. >> The libraries in universities or colleges won\'t disappear. but nowadays, local libraries are hard to find. I think people prefer watching their cellphones or televisions instead of reading books.

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