Essay
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Essay: How often do you go to the library? What would happen if libraries suddenly disappeared?
=> Last semester, I often go to library whenever I have break time between lectures.
the library in the university or college aren't disappeared but nowadays, local libraries are hard to find. I think people prefer watching their cell phone or television instead of book.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Jacob!^^
Thank you for accomplishing your homework.
You have great ideas to impart. :)
I definitely agree with the things you wrote.
See you on Monday!^^
_T. Mayleen_
Last semester, I often go to library whenever I have break time between lectures.
>> Last semester, I often go to the library whenever I have break-time in between lectures.the library in the university or college aren\'t disappeared but nowadays, local libraries are hard to find. I think people prefer watching their cell phone or television instead of book.
>> The libraries in universities or colleges won\'t disappear. but nowadays, local libraries are hard to find. I think people prefer watching their cellphones or televisions instead of reading books.
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