Essay
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Dear [Name],
A fantastic Friday to you and your family! ^.^
Soo, don\'t be sad.
We need to be positive about our class.
I also hope we can still study and learn English together when you go back to your country.
I want to wait for you.
You are a great student, so I still want to have classes with you.
I will pray for us to be together again. ^^
Anyway, enjoy your stay in Hawaii! ^^,
Take care of yourself too! ^^.
I will surely miss you. T.T
... Teacher Paula ... ^.~
Paula, I\'m sad now.
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: I\'m sad now, Paula.
Because Korean staff said to me they\'re not sure I can study with you again.
>> Because, your Korean co-workers said to me that they\'re not sure if I can study with you again.
>> OR: Paula, I\'m sad, because your Korean co-workers said to me that they\'re not sure if I can study with you again.
One month later, If you don\'t have a class at 5:10, I could study with you.
>> One month later, if you don\'t have a class at 5:10, I can study with you.
I really hope I can study Engish with you again.
>> I really hope I can study English with you again.
I think you are a good teacher.
>> CORRECT!
Thank you for teaching me English, and take care of you. ^^
>> Thank you for teaching me English, and take care of yourself. ^^
>> OR: Thank you for teaching me English and take care. ^^
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