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2016-11-25 · 첨삭 강사 Paula

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Paula, I'm sad now. Because Korean staff said to me they're not sure I can study with you again. One month later, If you don't have a class at 5:10, I could study with you. I really hope I can study Engish with you again. I think you are a good teacher. Thank you for teaching me English, and take care of you. ^^

강사 첨삭

Dear [Name],

 

A fantastic Friday to you and your family! ^.^

 

Soo, don\'t be sad.

We need to be positive about our class.

I also hope we can still study and learn English together when you go back to your country.

I want to wait for you.

You are a great student, so I still want to have classes with you.

I will pray for us to be together again. ^^

 

Anyway, enjoy your stay in Hawaii! ^^,

Take care of yourself too! ^^.

I will surely miss you. T.T

 

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

 

 

Paula, I\'m sad now.

>> CORRECT!

>> OR: I\'m sad now, Paula.

Because Korean staff said to me they\'re not sure I can study with you again.

>> Because, your Korean co-workers said to me that they\'re not sure if I can study with you again.

 

>> OR: Paula, I\'m sad, because your Korean co-workers said to me that they\'re not sure if I can study with you again.

 

One month later, If you don\'t have a class at 5:10, I could study with you.

>> One month later, if you don\'t have a class at 5:10, I can study with you.

I really hope I can study Engish with you again.

>> I really hope I can study English with you again.

I think you are a good teacher.
>> CORRECT!

Thank you for teaching me English, and take care of you. ^^

>> Thank you for teaching me English, and take care of yourself. ^^

>> OR: Thank you for teaching me English and take care. ^^

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