Essay
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강사 첨삭
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There is no Thanksgiving day, but we have Choosuk so we have to
perform ancestral rites in dinner.
>> There is no Thanksgiving day in my country, but we have
Choosuk. We have to perform an ancestral rite at dinner time.
So my aunt and mother usually cook, and sometimes I help them
also.
>> Correct.
In Choosuk, all of our grand family is in my home, and we have
trouble to hold back our pets. TT
>> In Choosuk, all our relatives come to our home. Because of
this, we have trouble handling of their pets.
We don\'t celebrate Thanksgiving day, but I think many
people who celebrate Thanksgiving day is literally thanks to god for giving.
>> We don\'t celebrate Thanksgiving day, but I think many
people who celebrate Thanksgiving day are literally saying thanks God for his
generosity.
And I also think they need a special holiday that they can be
with their family, and eat special foods.
>> I also think they need a special holiday when they can be
with their family, and eat special foods.
I think this culture is very good because it gives people
some....um opportunity to rest and enjoy dinner.
>> Correct.
The motivation of learning of English is ...
>> My motivation in learning English is ...
First of all, I want to travel many where and I want to
communicate my people.
>> First of all, I want to travel to many places and be able
to communicate with the people.
The second reason is my university\'s all classes use English
when professors do their lecture.
>> The second reason is that all my classes in the university
use English. The professors give their lecture in English.
I don\'t understand this policy of my university.TT
>> Correct.
The last reason is I will go Miamy in 2020, and I thout that I
have to practice in advance.
>> The last reason is that I will be going to Miami in 2020 so
I thought of practicing in advance.
My afraid of it is usually r
>> What I fear most is usually....
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