Essay
학생이 쓴 원문
I went to the jeㅡju do with my family two years ago.
We had a good time.
We were there for one weekend.
We went to the different beach and restaurant.
My daughter and son is very happy but last day is very
tired.
강사 첨삭
Thank you very much, Miss [이름]!
I hope you could have a great summer vacation again!
I went to the jeㅡju do with my family two years ago.
>>I went to Jeju Island with my family two years ago.
We had a good time.
>>CORRECT!
We were there for one weekend.
>>CORRECT!
We went to the different beach and restaurant.
>>We went to different beaches and restaurants.
My daughter and son is very happy but last day is very tired.
>>My daughter and son were very happy, but the last day was very tiring.
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