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T. Jeny

Do people in your country talk a lot about other people\'s appearance?

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I live in South Korea so let\'s see koreans. they are absolutely talk a lot about other\'s appearance.

>>I live in South Korea so let\'s talk about  Koreans. They absolutely talk a lot about others\' appearance.

I don\'t like this stupid values.

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When I\'ve been to the United State America, I was totally fascinated by natives\' thinking.

>>When I was in the United State of America, I was totally fascinated by the way they think.

They don\'t care how look is other people.

>>They don\'t care about on how people look.

Whatever others wear, do,and eat...even when the little boy is singing on the street.

>>They can wear, do and eat whatever they like. You can also see a little boy singing on the streets.
Who cares? But in South Korea? It is awful.

>>Who cares? But in Korea, it\'s awful.

All the girls on street is judging others\' appearance and when people just walk on the street, they always says \" Wow look at that guy he\'s so cute\" or \" How disgusting he is.,blah blah....

>>All the girls on the streets are judging others\' appearance and say, \" Wow, that guy looks cute\" or \" How disgusting he is.,blah blah....
I really don\'t like this kind of people.

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Why should I care of others\' sight?

>>Why should I care about others\' way of thinking?
I just want koreans to admit each\'s personality and appearance.

>>I just want Koreans to accept each other\'s personality and appearance.