Essay
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Hello [이름],
Thank you for you homework, I hope this could really help you increase your skills in English.
You need to remember to do more things that you are good and do less with the things you aren\'t good at.
Have a wonderful day!!!!
T. Jeny
What are some things you should do for a job interview? How about things you shouldn\'t do?
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I will talk about four categories in this essay.
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The attitude, passion, knowledge and contents.
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First of all, let\'s talk about the attitude.
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When you have a job interview, you should be brave and confident.
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Even if you don\'t know what to say or don\'t understand given question, don\'t get flurried or be in panic, and say something just clearly, and confidently.
>>Even if you don\'t know what to say or don\'t understand the given question, don\'t get flurried or be in a panic, just say something clearly, and confidently.
And smiling is also important, but in the section of attitude, it is important to appeal yourself that why the company has to employee you, and why they need you.
>>Smiling is also important, but in the aspect of attitude, it is important to appeal yourself to them on why the company has to employ you, and why they need you.
And be careful, No white socks!!
>>And be careful, No white lies!!
Secondly, I will mention about your passion.
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You must show your passion, and your potential interest power in that job.
>>You must show your passion, your potential, and your interest \\in the job.
It is also great to give them some examples you experienced.
>>It is also great to give them some examples of your experiences.
Third, the knowledge. I mean that you should know about that company, an interviewer or CEO.
>>Third, knowledge. I mean that you should know about the company, the interviewer or the CEO.
Knowing about those will definitely help you to answer any question.
>>Knowing about these will definitely help you answer any questions.
If you read, for example, a book written by CEO or someone in that company, and if you use some specific expressions in it, they will be very impressed.
>>For example, you have read a book written by the CEO or someone in that company, use some specific expressions in it, they will be very impressed.
By the way, the last thing is indeed the most important in your interview.
>>By the way, the last thing is indeed the most important in an interview.
It is \'contents. \'Don\'t go to the wrong way.
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Focus on your given question and required answer.
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Answer by your own unique words that they want.
>>Answer with your own unique words that they are expecting from you.
Just don\'t loose your topic, and focus on required way to answer.
>>Just don\'t lose your topic and focus on the required way to answer.
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