essay

Thanks for the essay SARAH!

I appreciate the effort. However, you must be careful when writing your sentences.

If you are talking about things in general, use the plural form of the word.  

It\'s true the mistakes below are just minor but even so, they still made the sentences grammatically incorrect.

Kindly go over the corrections made.

See you on Friday!

~Teacher Shanee^^,

Q. write an essay about what inspires you

: New challenge and new experience inspire me, I think.

>>> New challenges and experiences inspire me, I think.
 That is why I like to travel to other country.

>>> That\'s why I like traveling to other countries.
 Usually I go abroad, but I like to travel within my own country.

>>> I usually go abroad, but I like traveling domestically.
 If I get married, I want to travel within my own country by a camping car.

>>> If I get married, I would like to travel within my own country by a camping car.
 Some people buy a camping car and the other people make a camping car with used car because a camping car is pretty expensive :)

>>> Some people buy a camping car and others make their own camping car with used cars because one is pretty expensive.
 I also want to make a camping ca because not only the cost of new one is expensive but also making the car is a new challenge.

>>> I also want to make a camping car not just because of the cost but because of the challenge.