ESSAY
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ESSAY: Answer the question below. Write 3-5 sentences only.
>> Do you like meeting new people?
I like meeting new people. I\'m shy at first, but I enjoy talking to them.
>> I take great pleasure in meeting new people. Although I feel shy at first, I still enjoy talking to them.
I used to be awkward, so I couldn\'t talk first, but these days, I sometimes talk first to break the ice.
>> Starting a conversation was something that I found challenging as I used to be awkward in front of strangers, but these days, there are times that I find it easier to talk first just to break the ice.
Even though I\'m still shy, I think I\'ve got a little courage to talk to new people first.
>> correct
I like opportunities such as events, contests, and programs that meet new people.
>> Taking part in events such as contests or programs where I can meet new people is something that I take delight in.
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