ESSAY
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes, I should be familiar with phrasal verbs as well as idioms which are always new to me!!Thank you, Debbie!! See you Tomorrow!!
ESSAY: Can you name three jobs you can be good at?
Three jobs I can be good at are understanding the mental state of my students, carrying out my duty as a teacher, and studying to extend my current knowledge and skills.
I’ve been a member of a book club for over 8 years. I’ve been reading a various kinds of books including psychology, philosophy, futuristic science, novels, etc.. these activities help me a lot to understand my students’ behaviors. and I can guide them nicely without hurting their emotions. So my students are always nice to me unlike some students act harshly on their teachers. to guide students in the right way and to let them act in good manner are my duty as a teacher. I’ve been taught from the books and other people that I should keep studying how to control myself from any disagreeable act to be a great teacher.
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Hi [이름]!
Good afternoon.
I\'m happy to read your response to your teacher\'s question.
I\'m happy to know that you\'re positive of your thoughts about teachers.
It is easy to relate while reading your composition.
Thank you.
Here are my corrections.
Three jobs I can be good at are understanding the mental state of my students, carrying out my duty as a teacher, and studying to extend my current knowledge and skills.
>> Correct!
I’ve been a member of a book club for over 8 years.
>> Correct!
>> I’ve been a member of a book club for more than 8 years.
I’ve been reading a various kinds of books including psychology, philosophy, futuristic science, novels, etc.. these activities help me a lot to understand my students’ behaviors. and I can guide them nicely without hurting their emotions.
>> I’ve been reading a various kinds of books including psychology, philosophy, futuristic science, novels, and etc. These activities help me a lot to understand my students’ behaviors and to guide them nicely without hurting their emotions.
So my students are always nice to me unlike some students act harshly on their teachers.
>> So, my students are always nice to me unlike others who act harshly to their teachers.
to guide students in the right way and to let them act in good manner are my duty as a teacher.
>> To guide students in the right way and to let them act in good manners is my duty as a teacher.
I’ve been taught from the books and other people that I should keep studying how to control myself from any disagreeable act to be a great teacher.
>> I’ve been taught from the books and other people that I should keep studying how to control myself from any disagreeable act that hinders me to be a great teacher.
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