Essay
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Thanks for sharing Cecelia! I think that was really memorable for you.
But how was your Chuseok this year? Happy to hear your story in the next class. ^^
~~Teacher May~~
The most memorable Chuseok,
It was the first Chuseok at my in-laws\' house since I got married.
>> My most memorable Chuseok holiday was when I had my first Chuseok at my in-laws\' house since I got married.
I had to do a lot of things I didn\'t do before I got married.
>> I had to do a lot of things I didn\'t use to do before I got married.
Now we buy and eat Songpyeon, but then my mother-in-law and I made Songpyeon at home.
>> Now, we just buy and eat Songpyeon. However, my mother-in-law and I made Songpyeon at home this time.
I felt a lot of pressure on home work, but now I\'m used to it.
>> I felt a lot of pressure from doing house works, but now I\'m used to it.
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