Essay: a terrifying experience when you were young

When I was young, my family including my grandparents lived in a very small town in a rural area. All of our family members engaged in farming, cultivating mainly rice. But the amount of rich we harvested was not enough. It even lacked to be spent for our family so we had to borrow some more rice from our neighbors and our debt was constantly snowballing. In order to escape from such difficulties, my mother made a big decision to leave home and make money in a city to support her family. I do not even remember when she left home because I was so young at that time. She lived by herself, being separated from her family, in the city for a long time until I was 25 years old. Although I was not aware at that time, now I can understand how lonely and miserable life she had to live to earn and to save money for her family. I can imagine she even walked for several hours to save the bus fare and did not buy a piece of cloth for herself. Please see the Nov. 1st's feedback page for more.

Hello there!^^

This is quite a story!^^

But then I admire your mother.

For her to  give you and your family a better life, she sacrificed a lot.

With simple gestures, show your mother how you appreciate her effort. I\'m very sure, she would be really happy^^

~~T. Nina^^

When I was young, my family including my grandparents lived in a very small town in a rural area.

>>Correct!

 All of our family members engaged in farming, cultivating mainly rice.

>> All of our family members were engaged in farming, cultivating mainly rice.

But the amount of rich we harvested was not enough.

>>But the amount of rice we harvested was not enough.

 It even lacked to be spent for our family so we had to borrow some more rice from our neighbors and our debt was constantly snowballing.

>>It was not even enough for our family so, we had to borrow more rice from our neighbors and so, our debt was constantly snowballing.

In order to escape from such difficulties, my mother made a big decision to leave home and make money in a city to support her family.

>>Correct!

 I do not even remember when she left home because I was so young at that time.

>>I could not even remember when she left home because I was so young at that time.

She lived by herself, being separated from her family, in the city for a long time until I was 25 years old.

>>Correct!

Although I was not aware at that time, now I can understand how lonely and miserable life she had to live to earn and to save money for her family.

>>Although I was not aware at that time, now I can understand how lonely and miserable the life she had to live just to earn and to save money for her family.

 I can imagine she even walked for several hours to save the bus fare and did not buy a piece of cloth for herself.

>>Correct!

 Please see the Nov. 1st\'s feedback page for more.

>>Correct! [for the continuation of my story.]^^