essay about longer school calander

honestly, i\'m not sure what i understand is right.
as far as i understand,\'longer school calander\' means that students stay and study in school longer than now.(?)
>> Honestly, I\'m not sure what I understand is right.
 As far as I understand, \'longer school calendar\' means that students have to stay and study in school longer than now.(?)
in my opinion, it\'s not good. korean students(senior high school students) study in the school until 10PM. it\'s so tired. they might learn diverse thing outside, but school force them to study hard in the school. so, some students just study. they don\'t have any goal. so am i.
>> In my opinion, it\'s not good. Korean students (senior high school students) study in school until 10PM. It\'s so tiring. They might learn diverse things outside, but school force them to study hard in school. So, some students just study. They don\'t have any goal. So am I.
when i was high school student, i just think that if i study hard, i can enter good university and i have a great job. but, it is not.
students have to think about what they want to do and what they wanna be when they grew up. i thought i would be a nice guy who is wearing nice and expensive suit.
>> When I was a high school student, I just thought that if I study hard, I can enter a good university and I would have a great job but, it is not.
 Students have to think about what they want to do and what they want be when they grow up. I thought I would be a nice guy who is wearing nice and expensive suit.
these days, i study hard for a job. but i wanna enjoy my life. i hang out with my friends and girlfriend. and i study english voluntarily. because i wanna speak english very well.
>> These days, I study hard for a job but I want to enjoy my life too. I hang out with my friends and my girlfriend. I study English voluntarily because I want to speak English well.
 anyway, i hope for students to live freely.

>> Anyway, I hope students to live freely.