Essay: At what are you good?
학생이 쓴 원문
I play tennis pretty good. I have been playing tennis since middle school. Considering the years of time I spent playing tennis, I now should be a professional player, but I’m still far from the level. I am a member of a local tennis club in my neighborhood and play tennis almost every morning of the weekends, which, in fact, often triggers a conflict between my wife and me because she claims that I spend too much time for myself. She does want me to spend time for our family. Apart from the sport, I’m a quite well organized and have analytical skills. If a task or an issue rises, I take a strategic approach, taking all the factors into account and analyzing the causes of the problem, to tackle the issue. I’m persistent in achieving my goals. Once I set up an objective, I never give up and continue to put my effort and energy into completing it. Thanks to such my qualities, I could finish the MBA course and pass the US CPA exam although I faced so many difficulties along the way
강사 첨삭
Hello there,
Thank you for writing about your skills in playing tennis. I do know that you are good at expressing your thoughts and opinions. I would like to remind you that \"Learning\" something new is like stacking building blocks. The more you have, the higher you can go. Start piling that block for your future Thank you!!!
T.Nina^^
I play tennis pretty good.
>> correct
I have been playing tennis since middle school.
>> correct
Considering the years of time I spent playing tennis, I now should be a professional player, but I’m still far from the level.
>> Considering the years that I\'ve spent in playing tennis, I should be a professional tennis player now, but I\'m still far from the level of becoming a professional.
I am a member of a local tennis club in my neighborhood and play tennis almost every morning of the weekends, which, in fact, often triggers a conflict between my wife and me because she claims that I spend too much time for myself.
>> I am a member of a local tennis club in my neighborhood, so I play almost every morning during the weekends.
In fact, it triggers a conflict between my wife and I because she claims that I spend more time for myself.
She does want me to spend time for our family.
>> correct
Apart from the sport, I’m a quite well organized and have analytical skills.
>> Apart from sports, I\'m quite well-organized and rational.
If a task or an issue rises, I take a strategic approach, taking all the factors into account and analyzing the causes of the problem, to tackle the issue.
>> If a task or an issue arises, I take a strategic approach, taking all factors into account and analyzing the cause of the problem to tackle the issue.
I’m persistent in achieving my goals.
>> I\'m persistent in achieving my goals.
Once I set up an objective, I never give up and continue to put my effort and energy into completing it.
>> correct
>> OR: Once I set up an objective, I never give up and continue to put my effort and energy to accomplish a task.
Thanks to such my qualities, I could finish the MBA course and pass the US CPA exam although I faced so many difficulties along the way
>> Thanks to my attitude, I could finish the MBA course and pass the US CPA exam, although I faced so many difficulties along the way.^^
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