Essay: bad habit

I have a short temper that I have been trying hard to fix for a long time. I have a high competitive and fighting spirit toward victory. I cannot stand losing a game or a competition. Especially when I play a game like tennis, I am totally immersed in and cannot see others. The problem is that when I play a double game, I easily get upset and accuse the other when my partner makes a mistake or his play does not live up to my expectation. When you play a double, you should always encourage your partner and cheer up even when he makes a fault. This is a manner and courtesy. I am well aware of that rationally, but I occasionally lose my emotional control and later regret it. I believe that being momentarily disappointed and get challenged about losing a competition is a good trait to possess. However, we sometimes need to just enjoy the game itself regardless its result: victory or defeat.

Hello again Sir [이름]^^ Thank you so much for sending me a composition today. You made my day! I really enjoy reading your ideas. You did an amazing job! I do understand your stand, we really like to win a competition. Actually that kind of characteristic is a tool to be successful, being competitive is really one that makes people reach their goals. We can talk more about this in class! Have a great day! See you! Teacher Nina I have a short temper that I have been trying hard to fix for a long time. >> I have a short temper and I have been trying hard to change/manage for a long time now. >> OR Did you mean: I am a short tempered person and I have been trying to control it for a long time. >> OR: I am a short tempered person and I have been trying to manage it for a long time. I have a high competitive and fighting spirit toward victory. >> Did you mean: I am a competitive person and I have a high fighting spirit towards victory. I cannot stand losing a game or a competition. >> Correct! Especially when I play a game like tennis, I am totally immersed in and cannot see others. >> Correct! The problem is that when I play a double game, I easily get upset and accuse the other when my partner makes a mistake or his play does not live up to my expectation. >> The problem is that when I play a double game, I easily get upset and accuse the other when my partner makes a mistake or he does not live up to my expectation. When you play a double, you should always encourage your partner and cheer up even when he makes a fault. >> When you play double, you should always encourage your partner and cheer him/her up even when he makes a fault. >> OR: When you play double, you should always encourage your partner and cheer him/her up even when he makes a mistake. This is a manner and courtesy. >> Did you mean: This shows good manners and courtesy. I am well aware of that rationally, but I occasionally lose my emotional control and later regret it. >> Did you mean: I am well aware of that irrationality but occasionally I lose my emotional control and later regret it. I believe that being momentarily disappointed and get challenged about losing a competition is a good trait to possess. >> I believe that being momentarily disappointed and be challenged about losing a competition is a good trait to possess. However, we sometimes need to just enjoy the game itself regardless its result: victory or defeat. >> However, we sometimes need to just enjoy the game itself regardless of its result: victory or defeat. >> OR: However, we sometimes need to just enjoy the game itself regardless of the result.