ESSAY: \"Charity begins at home\", tell me something about this quote.
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ESSAY: \"Charity begins at home\", tell me something about this quote.
Charity begins at home, which means take care of our family before we help others.
We\'ll feel peaceful if there\'s no problem at home. It leads to good work in a company and good social relationships.
Also, I think that those who have a spare mind can afford to help others.
For example, I can suppose that my father is sick. In this case, I have to care of him and earn more much money to pay for treatment fee. So I will not have enough time to help others.
Therefore, I agree that charity begins at home.
강사 첨삭
That\'s definitely right.
Family first before community.
Thank you so much, Bo [이름] for doing your homework.
Keep it up!
~Teacher Eve.
Charity begins at home, which means take care of our family before we help others.>> \"Charity begins at home\" means to take care of our family before we help others.
We\'ll feel peaceful if there\'s no problem at home.
We\'ll feel peaceful if there\'s no problem at home.
>> Correct!
It leads to good work in a company and good social relationships.
>> Correct!
Also, I think that those who have a spare mind can afford to help others.
Also, I think that those who have a spare mind can afford to help others.
>> Correct!
For example, I can suppose that my father is sick.
For example, I can suppose that my father is sick.
>> For example, suppose that my father is sick.
In this case, I have to care of him and earn more much money to pay for treatment fee.
>> In this case, I have to care of him and earn more money to pay for his treatment fee.
So I will not have enough time to help others.
>> Correct!
Therefore, I agree that charity begins at home.
Therefore, I agree that charity begins at home.
>> Correct!
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