ESSAY: Do you believe that motivation and passion are the same? What passions fill up your life and

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~ Teacher Irene~

When comparing the two words which are motivation and passion, I strongly believe that those two words have similar meaning.

>>> When we talk about motivation and passion, I strongly believe that these two words have a similar meaning.

Because ordinary people would like to use words such like motivation and passion when they intensely wish to achieve their own goal.
>>> Generally speaking people use these words in times when they intensely wish to achieve their goals.
In my opinion, the positive passions make fullfill on people\'s mind and change their life.

>>> In my opinion, a strong passion may help fulfill a person\'s dream that may change his/her life.

To give an example, desiring to attain individual aim, helping other people who suffer from war in foreign country stimulate a sense of human\'s fulfillment.

>>> To give you an example, the desire to attain one\'s objective or more specifically when we are helping other people in war-torn countries, we are also reaching a level of fulfillment.

These passions is important factor for happy since it is embedded desire for human living.

>>> Passion is an important factor to happiness since it is embedded in our desire for human living.

In other words, there is a strong relation between passions and happiness.

>>> In other words, there is a strong relation between passion and happiness.

People who have passions can easily excel in their fields of works and achieve better results than those, who do not have those ambitions.

>>> People who are passionate can easily excel in their field or work and achieve better results than those who do not have those ambitions.

Besides that, by developing their abilities, people live happy life.
>>> Besides that, by developing their abilities, people can live a happy life. 
To conclude, I completely believe that having a passion is important for out life.

>>> In conclusion I completely believe that having the passion to get what we want is important for our life.