Essay : Do you believe that there is a possibility of human existence in the other planet? Why and w
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Yes !
More precisly, I think it could be possible that there is others creatures in the universe. It could be a human or alien or something else.
>> More absolutely, I think it could be possible that there is other creatures in the universe. It could be a human or alien or something else.
The universe is too immense and the distance between galaxies are too far to explore with out technology we have now.
>> Correct
Scientists say that in the universe, there are several galaxy with the planet system similar with out system.
>>Scientists say that in the universe, there are several galaxies with the solar system similar with our system.
For now, we don\'t have many proofs to show out this existence.
>> For now, we don\'t have many proofs to show this existence.
However, as we have discovered the universe of microorganism with the evolution of technology, one day we will be able to explore the cosmos.
>> Correct
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