(Essay) Do you like horror movies? Why or Whynot? If so, what\'s your favorite scary movie.
학생이 쓴 원문
I don\'t like horror movie. I don\'t know why people buy fear with money. When I saw horror movie, I turn on the light and sleep because I\'m scared to sleep at night or i go to friends house ans sleep together. My first horror movie is \"고사\" english title is \"Death Bell\". It is Korean horror movie. It\'s R-rated movie, but I saw it at 13years old in elementary school. All the students asked to watch this movie because It\'s really famous in those days. So we watched in our classroom together. After watch that movie, I can\'t sleep at night so I have to sleep with my mom for a week.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! It must be traumatizing as a child to watch something scary. I hope that you have recovered from it now. Watch something funny or romantic instead when you have the time. Enjoy your day!~~T.Dee
>>I don\'t like horror movies.
I don\'t know why people buy fear with money.
>>CORRECCT!
>>OR: I don\'t understand why people pay money to be scared.
When I saw horror movie, I turn on the light and sleep because I\'m scared to sleep at night or i go to friends house ans sleep together.
>>When I watch a horror movie, I turn on the light and when I sleep because I\'m scared or I go to my friends house.
My first horror movie is \"고사\" english title is \"Death Bell\".
>>The first horror movie I watched is \"고사\" and the English title is \"Death Bell\".
It is Korean horror movie.
>>It is a Korean horror movie.
It\'s R-rated movie, but I saw it at 13years old in elementary school.
>>It\'s an R-rated movie, but I saw it when I was 13 years old while I was in elementary school.
All the students asked to watch this movie because It\'s really famous in those days.
>>All the students like to watch this movie because it was really famous in those days.
So we watched in our classroom together.
>>So, together, we watched it in our classroom.
After watch that movie, I can\'t sleep at night so I have to sleep with my mom for a week.
>>After watching that movie, I can\'t sleep at night so I had to sleep with my mom for a week.
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