Essay: Do you need coffee to wake you up in the morning?

2020-01-17 · 첨삭 강사 Eve

학생이 쓴 원문

When I wake up in the morning, I usually drink a cup of coffee. I think the drinking makes me feel better and leads my body, especially my brain, to work more actively. Sometimes, it is not easy to find a cup of coffee in the morning especially while I am in a trip. By the way, in this situation, not drinking a cup of coffee does not make any differences to me. I wake up as usual and my body works as normal. Some people say that not drinking coffee in the morning makes them nervous and they become irritated to find a coffee shop or coffee machine. But, this case does not apply to me. Therefore, I think coffee is not essential for me to wake up. Anyway, a cup of coffee in the morning makes me happy. Adding a piece of chocolate cake makes me happier. (All of a sudden, I am afraid my body is already accustomed to coffee, which makes no differences with/without coffee:-))

강사 첨삭

This is great and that is good news as well, but as for me, I highly need a cup of coffee in the morning to boost up my system. 

I also agree with your statement about chocolate cakes. 

I hope you have both a coffee and chocolate cake this morning.

Great composition as always, Mr. [이름]!

Keep it up!

See you in class!

~Teacher Eve.    

When I wake up in the morning, I usually drink a cup of coffee.

>> Correct!
 I think the drinking makes me feel better and leads my body, especially my brain, to work more actively.

>> Correct!
 Sometimes, it is not easy to find a cup of coffee in the morning especially while I am in a trip.

>> Sometimes, it is not easy to find a cup of coffee in the morning especially while I am on a trip.
 By the way, in this situation, not drinking a cup of coffee does not make any differences to me.

>> By the way, in this situation, not drinking a cup of coffee does not make any difference to me.
 I wake up as usual and my body works as normal.

>> I wake up as usual and my body works normally.
 Some people say that not drinking coffee in the morning makes them nervous and they become irritated to find a coffee shop or coffee machine.

>> Correct!
 But, this case does not apply to me.

>> Correct!
 Therefore, I think coffee is not essential for me to wake up.

>> Correct!
 Anyway, a cup of coffee in the morning makes me happy. Adding a piece of chocolate cake makes me happier. 

>> Correct!
 (All of a sudden, I am afraid my body is already accustomed to coffee, which makes no differences with/without coffee:-))

>> Correct!

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