Essay: Do you need coffee to wake you up in the morning?
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This is great and that is good news as well, but as for me, I highly need a cup of coffee in the morning to boost up my system.
I also agree with your statement about chocolate cakes.
I hope you have both a coffee and chocolate cake this morning.
Great composition as always, Mr. [이름]!
Keep it up!
See you in class!
~Teacher Eve.
When I wake up in the morning, I usually drink a cup of coffee.
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I think the drinking makes me feel better and leads my body, especially my brain, to work more actively.
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Sometimes, it is not easy to find a cup of coffee in the morning especially while I am in a trip.
>> Sometimes, it is not easy to find a cup of coffee in the morning especially while I am on a trip.
By the way, in this situation, not drinking a cup of coffee does not make any differences to me.
>> By the way, in this situation, not drinking a cup of coffee does not make any difference to me.
I wake up as usual and my body works as normal.
>> I wake up as usual and my body works normally.
Some people say that not drinking coffee in the morning makes them nervous and they become irritated to find a coffee shop or coffee machine.
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But, this case does not apply to me.
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Therefore, I think coffee is not essential for me to wake up.
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Anyway, a cup of coffee in the morning makes me happy. Adding a piece of chocolate cake makes me happier.
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(All of a sudden, I am afraid my body is already accustomed to coffee, which makes no differences with/without coffee:-))
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