ESSAY: Do you think global warming is real and will affect the coastal regions of the world? Will th
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The issue of global warming could be a hugely valuable topic and have to be solved by people who live the world.
I strongly believe that we have to save the coastal regions of the world from global warming.
Some people optimistic about global warming, and they believe that we don\'t need to worry about cities where are located to coastal regions at once. Their belief is that even though weather is more warmer than before, it is impossible to be the cities underwater.
However, some people hold the view that protecting the global warming is necessary not only for person who lives in coastal region but also for people who live in the world. For example, according to the research, residents feel that land is far smaller than before, and it is watched by researcher from image map that land have been underwater.
As has been demonstrated, being underwater the land is very important issue for people.In the long run, it would be have to be solve and be concerned by everyone.
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The issue of global warming could be a hugely valuable topic and have to be solved by people who live the world.
>>> The issue of global warming could be a hugely sensitive/important topic and has to be solved by all the in the world.
I strongly believe that we have to save the coastal regions of the world from global warming.
>>> Correct.
Some people optimistic about global warming, and they believe that we don\'t need to worry about cities where are located to coastal regions at once.
>>> Some people are optimistic about global warming such that they believe we don\'t need to worry about cities located in the coastal regions.
Their belief is that even though weather is more warmer than before, it is impossible to be the cities underwater.
>>> They believe that even though weather has gotten warmer than before, it is still impossible for the cities to sink underwater.
However, some people hold the view that protecting the global warming is necessary not only for person who lives in coastal region but also for people who live in the world.
>>> However, some people hold the view that solving the global warming is necessary not only for those who live in coastal regions but also for all the people in the world.
For example, according to the research, residents feel that land is far smaller than before, and it is watched by researcher from image map that land have been underwater.
>>> For example, according to research, some residents feel that the land area has become far smaller than before, and researchers have noticed from image maps that some parts of the land are now underwater.
As has been demonstrated, being underwater the land is very important issue for people.
>>> As has been demonstrated, the land being underwater is a very important issue for most people.
In the long run, it would be have to be solve and be concerned by everyone.
>>> In the long run, it is everyone\'s concern so it has to be solved by everyone.
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