ESSAY: \"Education should be free\", tell me something about this statement. Do you agree?
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes, I agree with this statement.
I think Education must be free and there is no taboo
So we can educated and learn to everything after that judge is on ourselves
for instance, if education has a taboo, we are able to learn topic which someone selected and this is bring about unbalance education furthermore it\'s indirect brainwash.
These thing always causing bad consequence.
Like Nazi or Fascism or Japanese militarism.
and again those things bring about world war and uncountable victim
all those thing is butterfly effect.
I heard someone say,
The most dangerous and horrible person is not a smart or ignorant person, but just read only one book and trust blindly.
I think that phrase is see through our real life.
we have to deal with education for everything and we have to accept those things.
education has to be free than anything
there is no wall, like age, gender, race and others. there is only be equality and I hope so some days
강사 첨삭
HAPPY MONDAY!
Interesting points you have here.
Good job!
~Teacher Eve.
Yes, I agree with this statement.
>> Correct!
I think Education must be free and there is no taboo
>> I think Education should be free and that is not a taboo.
So we can educated and learn to everything after that judge is on ourselves
>> So we can be educated and learn from everything, after that the judgement is on ourselves.
for instance, if education has a taboo, we are able to learn topic which someone selected and this is bring about unbalance education furthermore it\'s indirect brainwash.
>> For instance, if education is a taboo, we are able to learn topics that someone has selected, this will bring an imbalance in our education, furthermore, indirect brainwash.
These thing always causing bad consequence.
>> These things are always causing bad consequences.
Like Nazi or Fascism or Japanese militarism.
>> Like the Nazi, Fascism or the Japanese military.
and again those things bring about world war and uncountable victim
>>And again, those things brought out world war and uncountable victims.
all those thing is butterfly effect.
>> All those things are butterfly effect.
I heard someone say,
>> Correct!
The most dangerous and horrible person is not a smart or ignorant person, but just read only one book and trust blindly.
>> The most dangerous and horrible person is not a smart or an ignorant person, but if they just read only one book and trust blindly.
I think that phrase is see through our real life.
>> I think that phrase is
we have to deal with education for everything and we have to accept those things.
>> We have to deal with education about everything and we have to accept those things.
education has to be free than anything
>> Education has to be free more than anything.
there is no wall, like age, gender, race and others. there is only be equality and I hope so some days
>> There is no wall, like age, gender, race and others; there is only equality and I hope for this to be implemented some day.
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