Essay: favorite thing I want to do with my family
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Good evening Sir [이름]!
I hope you had a fantastic day today.
Anyway, I think you can afford to travel overseas with your family if you want to.
As they say, \'if there\'s a will, there\'s a way\'.
See you later!
Take care.
Teacher Nina
Actually I like playing tennis so I spend 3 or 4 hours on playing tennis every weekend, which is obviously the thing my wife hates the most.
>>>Actually, I like playing tennis so I spend 3 or 4 hours on playing tennis every weekend. Obviously, this thing is what my wife hates the most.
>>>Or: Since I like spending 3 or 4 hours on playing tennis every weekend, this is obviously the thing my wife hates the most.
My theory is that I need to exercise on a weekend since I do not have enough time to do that during weekdays and, moreover, the sport is the only thing I do to get rid of stress from daily tough works.
>>> My theory is that I need to exercise on weekends since I do not have enough time to do that during weekdays; moreover, that sport is the only thing that I do to get rid of stress from daily tough works.
After playing tennis on a Saturday and Sunday morning, I usually get home about 11 o’clock and go out with my wife and daughter to go shopping, visit our parents, or go to a restaurant.
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After playing tennis on a Saturday and Sunday mornings, I usually get home at about 11 o\'clock, then I go out with my wife and daughter to go shopping, visit our parents, or go to a restaurant.
Going to a good restaurant and enjoying delicious food is one of my favorites.
>>>Correct!
Secondly, having dinner together with my wife and daughter is the thing I do not want to miss.
>>>Correct!
Talking about small things with them over a glass of wine at dinner table is the happiest moment I enjoy.
>>>Correct!
If I can afford, I would like to travel to other countries with my family as well.
>>>Correct!
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