Essay (Feb 24th, 2022)

2022-02-25 · 첨삭 강사 Roanne

학생이 쓴 원문

What would you change about your neighborhood? >> I wouldn’t change about my neighborhood. I like all of them themselves. Everyone has his/her own personality and characteristic. The individuality has to be respected. I’m very sorry that I received your call, being heavily drunk yesterday. I can’t exactly remember what I told you. I’m trying to bring back what, I think, I might have told you. However all I remember now is the fact that I clenched my left fist, holding my mobile phone in the other hand, and I said “I did it! I did it!”, Why I did it, I have no idea at all. I’m writing this task feeling severe hangover. I just need to go back on the bed to sleep again. I took a day off today.

강사 첨삭

Hello, U [이름]!

Oh, it\'s totally fine. We talked a lot yesterday and don\'t worry, you participated well in the class yesterday. I hope you feel better soon.

Thank you for answering and sharing your thoughts on this one! 
Talk to you later~

~T. Roanne ^_^
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I wouldn’t change about my neighborhood. 
>> Correct! 
I like all of them themselves. 
>> Correct! 
Everyone has his/her own personality and characteristic. 
>> Everyone has his/her own personality and characteristics. 
The individuality has to be respected.
>> Correct! 
I’m very sorry that I received your call, being heavily drunk yesterday. 
>> Correct! 
I can’t exactly remember what I told you. 
>> Correct! 
I’m trying to bring back what, I think, I might have told you. 
>> Correct! 
However all I remember now is the fact that I clenched my left fist, holding my mobile phone in the other hand, and I said “I did it! I did it!”, Why I did it, I have no idea at all. 
>> However, all I remember now is the fact that I clenched my left fist, holding my mobile phone in the other hand, and I said “I did it! I did it!”, Why I did it, I have no idea at all. 
I’m writing this task feeling severe hangover. 
>> Correct! 
I just need to go back on the bed to sleep again. 
>> Correct! 
I took a day off today.
>> Correct! 

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