Essay (Feb 24th, 2022)
학생이 쓴 원문
What would you change about your neighborhood?
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I wouldn’t change about my neighborhood. I like all of them themselves. Everyone has his/her own personality and characteristic. The individuality has to be respected.
I’m very sorry that I received your call, being heavily drunk yesterday. I can’t exactly remember what I told you. I’m trying to bring back what, I think, I might have told you. However all I remember now is the fact that I clenched my left fist, holding my mobile phone in the other hand, and I said “I did it! I did it!”, Why I did it, I have no idea at all. I’m writing this task feeling severe hangover. I just need to go back on the bed to sleep again. I took a day off today.
강사 첨삭
Hello, U [이름]!
Oh, it\'s totally fine. We talked a lot yesterday and don\'t worry, you participated well in the class yesterday. I hope you feel better soon.
Thank you for answering and sharing your thoughts on this one!
Talk to you later~
~T. Roanne ^_^
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I wouldn’t change about my neighborhood.
>> Correct!
I like all of them themselves.
>> Correct!
Everyone has his/her own personality and characteristic.
>> Everyone has his/her own personality and characteristics.
The individuality has to be respected.
>> Correct!
I’m very sorry that I received your call, being heavily drunk yesterday.
>> Correct!
I’m very sorry that I received your call, being heavily drunk yesterday.
>> Correct!
I can’t exactly remember what I told you.
>> Correct!
I’m trying to bring back what, I think, I might have told you.
>> Correct!
However all I remember now is the fact that I clenched my left fist, holding my mobile phone in the other hand, and I said “I did it! I did it!”, Why I did it, I have no idea at all.
>> However, all I remember now is the fact that I clenched my left fist, holding my mobile phone in the other hand, and I said “I did it! I did it!”, Why I did it, I have no idea at all.
I’m writing this task feeling severe hangover.
>> Correct!
I just need to go back on the bed to sleep again.
>> Correct!
I took a day off today.
>> Correct!
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