essay for today
학생이 쓴 원문
Because of a severe fatigue, I came to my office at 9:40 am this morning. Fortunately my boss didn't notice that I was late at work!
As I've been working here for four months, I feel my workplace is a very comfortable environment. Because my university is very small, there are only two staffs in my department and I have only one boss, who sometimes drops by my office but most of the time stays in his professor's office. Therefore, if I want, I can even find some time to do personal stuff on work time.
So it's really comfortable workplace, but not challenging enough for me. My job in here is the same familiar job as I had worked in graudate school. I am not satisfied because I don't feel I've been improved by working. What should I do?
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]! :)
Thank you so much for finding time in doing your essay today. Wow... I didn\'t know that you\'re not satisfied with the job that you have right now. Well, since you asked, you can try to explore things that will help you improve. For example, try new approaches in finishing your work load or maybe when you have counselling. Try to make it fun and enjoyable. I know that you are creative and you can think of fun ways for that. If it still doesn\'t work for you, then I think it\'s time for you to experience other things, look for a job that you really like and will enjoy. But first, you have to ask this: What do you really want?
I hope you\'ll have a wonderful day today. Take care and I\'ll call you again tomorrow.
~Ritch~
Because of a severe fatigue, I came to my office at 9:40 am this morning.
>>Because of severe fatigue, I came to my office at 9:40 this morning.
>>Because of severe fatigue, I came to work at 9:40 AM.
Fortunately my boss didn\'t notice that I was late at work!
>>Fortunately, my boss didn\'t notice that I was late for work.As I\'ve been working here for four months, I feel my workplace is a very comfortable environment.
>>As I\'ve been working here for four months, I feel that my workplace has a very comfortable environment.
Because my university is very small, there are only two staffs in my department and I have only one boss, who sometimes drops by my office but most of the time stays in his professor\'s office.
>>Since the university is very small, there are only two staffs working in our department and we only have one boss who sometimes drops by my office but most of the time stays in the professor\'s office.
Therefore, if I want, I can even find some time to do personal stuff on work time.>>Therefore, if I want, I can even fine some personal time during my working hours.So it\'s really comfortable workplace, but not challenging enough for me.
>>So it\'s a really comfortable workplace, but it\'s not challenging enough for me.
My job in here is the same familiar job as I had worked in graudate school.
>>My job here is familiar as the job that I had when I was still in graduate school.
I am not satisfied because I don\'t feel I\'ve been improved by working.
>>I am not satisfied because I don\'t feel like I\'ve improved in my work.
What should I do?
>>CORRECT!
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